Halloween Approaches...Please leave me any comments or opinions, I'm still honing my writing style so I really could do with some constructive criticisms.
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Vigilante Chapter 4Chapter 4 The witches had spent the night locked away in a holding cell, with two of the largest of the village men guarding the door. In the morning they had their hands tied together and their feet tied far enough apart that they could walk but not run. It took more than a score of the townsmen to move them to the river for their trial. Some of the witches went with dignity or were simply resigned to their fate, but a number of them, particularly the youngest of their number, kicked and screamed and had to be lumped out by two or more men. A few tried to escape as soon as they thoughtVigilante Chapter 4
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Vigilante Chapter 3Chapter 3 Corinne had spent the last few days subtly ingratiating herself towards some of the girls she suspected may be practising witchcraft. It was not an easy thing to do, trying to raise the subject in an atmosphere so stiflingly tense, but she managed to casually show her interest in the subject one night, and before long she had gained their trust. For their part they weren't the hardest to impress; they thought they just had a knack for finding other witches, or that they had an aura which attracted similar personalities. In truth they were just giddy teenagers, engrossed in this forbiddenVigilante Chapter 3
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Vigilante Chapter 2Chapter 2Vigilante Chapter 2
Corinne had been troubled of late. She lay in bed, realising that yet another night had passed where she had barely shut her eyes to sleep. It was a couple of days since the tragedy at the church, the whole town was awash with gossip about the exotic stranger, and everyone was suspicious of everyone else. Above all people had started to distrust Brendan Baverstock, albeit not enough to go without buying from him. But then who wants to appear disloyal to someone whose kin could potentially have you for dinner? Much easier to eat what he provides, lest you end u
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Vigilante Chapter 1 Chapter 1Vigilante Chapter 1
It was midday and the summer’s sun shone heavily overhead, its opulent waves beating down on the townsfolk as they went about their business. Apprentices and traders went about, acquiring goods and bartering each other down in order to go back to their masters a success. Young people, not quite old enough to work nor marry, yet old enough to go out without a nurse, were lazily making their way from stall to stall, examining the trinkets and baubles, smelling the scents from each of the food sellers, listening to the fevered arguments breaking out between customer and vendor.
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I do really like it though, I like the concept and you've got the art style down. I was thinking, maybe you should whack it in photo shop and mess with the colours a bit, get it into the iPod advert colours?
And yes, you spelt it right, although I haven't used that persona in quite a while!
Let me know how it goes if you work on it some more ^_^
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Greed is definitely by far the best character in the series - I highly recommend the new anime series if you're a fan of a manga - there are some great scenes taken straight from the manga, scene by scene! It is a lot better than the original series. ^^
You going to Expo in October?
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I'm afraid I'll be at Fuyucon in October instead of Expo. I was at Kita at the beginning of the year and really enjoyed it. Plus I'm getting a little bored of the expo format (easily done when you have no money to enjoy it properly!)
I take it you'll be at Expo not Fuyu?
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I appreciate both originality and fanart. Deal with it.
Check it out, fuyucon.org also kitacon.org in March. Obviously you've made plans for Fuyu this year but maybe have a look at the site and I might see you at Kita the next year ^_^
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Join the party, spread the word, embrace the fever!
<_< >_> Do you still use this thing or am I talking to a wall?
I do still use it, but I have done so little worth putting up recently that I just haven't updated lately.
But yes... hello to you too!
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